Poem / Poetry – A Poetic Duet With Fortyoneteen – “Sensual Senses”

Greetings and salutations – you smell nice!

(but then again it is only Monday after all)

So, once more unto the breach my dearest friends – time for me to shake my spear and see what I smash into!


[Ah yes, that will do nicely! (Beyonce – Smash Into You)]

I’ve been working on another collaboration with an amazing woman, we’ve worked together before and it is my pleasure to share our endeavours with you all.

Please check out the blog of Ms Fortyoneteen ladies and gentlemen, for she rocks mightily in many ways and has written some scintillating posts for your delectation (she writes ruddy well is what I mean):-

http://fortyoneteen.wordpress.com/

So, for our masterful piece of romantic verbosity, we used the Daily Prompt of Feeding The Senses because if you’re going to stimulate something then it might as well be things that don’t get you locked up for public indecency.

Enjoy the collaboration and as always, if you would like to write with me then just holler away, I’ll be there for you waiting for your call!

Also, just for fun, who thinks I should write a musical?

I’m tempted to do one and I was just curious how many of you would be keen for me to do one. Drop me a line in the comments afterwards, thank you!

Sensual Senses

Sensual Senses (By TooFullToWrite & Fortyoneteen)

You define my world like nobody else
Can’t begin to untangle you from myself
Treasure, can’t be measured in any way
Missing one day from you seems strange

I try to do more when I find I have less
Keep busy/ignore, the thoughts that suggest
Guarded or not, they search as I hide
Lose balance at once, fall deep in a sigh

Fragile porcelain, a feather in the ocean
Skimming the surface of wary devotion
Committing to your subtle, elegant allure
Thoughts of you blossom, things to adore

Your brow as it lifts, the question it begs
The curve of your mouth, lengthening breaths
So still and so quiet, your calm I embrace
You move with a knowing, a glorious grace

To understand how this attraction works
Is like trying to unravel fabric of the universe
Our fingertips caress each other so gently
Inhibitions melting away, locking gazes intently

Inside the waiting, a promise of much
An intangible something that hungers for touch
This confusion within, this one we can’t see
Ignore common sense, close eyes and just be

Want to gorge on more posts that stimulate your senses? Why not check out some of these glorious posts below:-

1. Cigarettes and Cheesecake | The Magic Black Book
2. An English breakfast | Geek Ergo Sum
3. vicariously in love with you
4. Early in the morning | vicariously in love with you
5. Nothing Really Stands Out | Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | likereadingontrains
6. Feed your senses | Nanuschka’s Blog
7. It Shouldn’t Be Strange, But Somehow Is | Ramisa the Authoress
8. The Best Sensation Of The Day | The Jittery Goat
9. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses « Mama Bear Musings
10. Birds Feed my Senses | بيسان
11. Oh for the sounds of silence… Especially at stupid o’clock. | thoughtsofrkh
12. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | suzie81’s Blog
13. Feed your senses- (Daily Prompt) | The Rider
14. Feed your senses | mcpw
15. Lilacs And Dog Breath | The Temenos Journal
16. 18.5 Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | family photos food & craft
17. Travellin’ Thru Rambles
18. Sense It | Travellin’ Thru Rambles
19. Marriage in Limbo: The In-Between State
20. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Playing for Time
21. Smoky Dreams | Virginia Views
22. Hairy Scary Eyeball | HpWpBp
23. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | L’S THOUGHTS….
24. smack smacks | thematticuskingdom
25. A Temporary Loss of Sight (and Sense) « The Robotic Hermit
26. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Chronicles of an Anglo Swiss
27. My Alarm Clock… | Haiku By Ku
28. Rise and Shine | aishaditta
29. Wake Up Call – 3 Part Haiku | Cozy Compulsions @ Midnight
30. The bizarre day to Sleep Alone | Completely Disappear
31. Nausea, Ugh… | Donbury Pond
32. Cabo no rabo e pá de terra por cima | SCOMBROS
33. Noise | Positivity Prevails
34. Feed your senses | A Teacher’s Blog
35. DP – Feed Your Senses | Life With Pink Princesses
36. Feed Your Senses – Kids, Coffee & Pancakes | Khana’s Web
37. Feeding the senses | The Nameless One
38. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | My Endless Rants & Ramblings
39. Write down the first sight, sound, smell, and | A Sign Of Life
40. Daily Post: The Sense of Intuition | A Sign Of Life
41. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Nomad Scribbles
42. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Postcards from
43. Found
44. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | The Tarot Alchemist
45. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Overcoming Bloglessness
46. Missing You | Angelyn’s Crimes of Passion
47. The OCD Leaf-blower and How he makes my Ears Bleed | Style and a Story
48. “Houston” & The Five Senses | Chasing Rabbit Holes
49. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Running After Ale
50. Sensing the Senses | Code Name Incog
51. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | writinglikeastoner
52. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Basically Beyond Basic
53. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | The Blogging Path
54. May 18 Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Nadeen’s Reading Corner
55. Feed your senses! | Melanie Ryding – Ryding2Health BLOG
56. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | phoenix journies: a story about starting over
57. Senses of a Sunday morning | Freya’s Halls
58. i wake and i sleep | Bubonicboon
59. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | biancadventures
60. Daily Prompt: Early Morning Smells and Sounds | My Daily Prompt Blog
61. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | A Hedonistic Wander
62. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | Points of View
63. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | huntprayerpoems
64. Sensual Senses – A collaborative poem with TooFullToWrite | fortyoneteen
65. Daily Prompt: Feed Your Senses | life n me!
66. Daily Prompt: Dulled | The Daily Post
67. Weekly Photo Challenge: Escape / DP Challenge: Feed Your Senses and Memory / Travel Theme: Elements | Travels and Trifles
68. A sense dulled | The Illustration Fan
69. Daily Prompt: Dulled « Mama Bear Musings
70. Potion Perfect. | ayimas
71. Natural Magic | Travellin’ Thru Rambles
72. Speak to me | Polyprotic Amory
73. DAILY PROMPT | juliemumonwheels
74. Daily Prompt: Dulled | Chronicles of an Anglo Swiss
75. A cross word to madness | Miss Moiety
76. Daily Prompt: Wake Up Call | My Daily Prompt Blog
77. Who let you in? | thoughtsofrkh
78. Daily Prompt: Dulled | The Blogging Path

13 thoughts on “Poem / Poetry – A Poetic Duet With Fortyoneteen – “Sensual Senses”

  1. Aw, I sigh…a sweet comfort, much needed on a Monday, thank you both for your beautiful words. As to your question; yes and yes again. I love musicals and am sure one from you would be delightfully devine. 🙂

    • I appreciate the comment very much and so does Fortyoneteen, I’m happy you enjoyed it. I will have to think about doing a musical in the future when things become a little less busy. It will have to be a comedy or have plenty of humour in it, that’s for sure!

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