Hello everyone.
I’ve been hard at it again and it pleases me greatly to find out that Mr Edward Hotspur is hosting another one of his Romantic Monday soirées.
Firstly, if you haven’t read his superb poem, then here it is:-
Edward Hotspur – Moon Lake Midnight
So, what have I been hard at you may ask?
Well, I’ll tell you because I like you.
Well, some of you.
Well, one of you.
Maybe.
If you buy me dinner 🙂
So, I have had a wonderful time conjuring up more words with Myss Jaynie Kat, a poetic goddess who has made this collaboration an effortlessly rewarding experience.
Please take time to read her poetry here, it is both breathtakingly powerful and stunningly sensual:-
And now, on with the show – grab your partner and dine on the opulence of these words as they transport you to the town known simply as “Romanceville.”
(Where’s it’s always hot and steamy and the good times flow!)
Citron Dreams (by TooFullToWrite & Myss Jaynie Kat)
Citron dreams got me squeezed
All juiced up inside
Tangy, zingy, full of something
My heart’s pumping like a machine
Started so simplistically
Intrinsically
Then I tasted
Sweet intensity
On your fingertips
Feeling kind of fruity, naughty
Creeping out on the vine
I’m taking my medicine
Softly layered
Sipping on the divine wine
Droplets form between us
Dropping
Teasing
Down
Lips have tasted heaven
Tickling
Meeting
Mine
Cannot separate us easily
A candid concoction of minds
Dancing to this ritual
A savoriness that is sublime
Melded, merged, mixed
Forever intertwined
It’s perfect alchemy
From bitter to sweet
Wrong to right
A spring in our step
All the things the flowers said
The ripening of emotions
Spinning out of random threads
Palest pinks to crimson hues
Every thought revolves on you
Lay me on the sweetest bed
Trace my petals
Release my scent
An ornamental seed has been planted
An odour so full of jazzy notes
A whispered breathlessness
Textured, coaxed
Whispered words merge in the night
Bodies twist in pure delight
A fertile purpose takes root
Dreams blend into sweetest hues
Wow!
You’re telling me!
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This is cool David, you guys worked well together. What a poetry machine you are, and you have a different voice for each one! Quite the chameleon. Congrats. Forty.
Thanks Forty, always look forward to hearing your comments! It’s amazing isn’t it how different they turn out. I could happily keep doing them forever! Look forward to chatting to you again soon, take care. David